Light as a Feather
Don’t: Rely on meaningless light verbs
Light verbs (also called empty verbs) are verbs that derive their meaning from other words, usually the noun that serves as the direct object.1 Though light verbs can carry meaning by themselves, when used as part of a larger phrase, they lose that meaning. For example, the verb “to make” normally means “to create” or “to force” but loses all meaning in phrases like “make a decision,” “make a difference,” “make a living,” and “make fun of.”
As a general rule, meaningless words equal uninteresting writing. Light verbs are a great way to increase your word count without adding any content.2 If overused, they can also cause your writing to sound redundant because the same handful of verbs tend to function as light verbs. Although you should not try to eliminate them completely at the expense of sounding natural, replacing as many as possible with meaningful verbs can help bring stale writing to life.
Do: Use active, meaningful verbs
Though common in everyday speech, light verbs usually have an active equivalent that results in more dynamic writing. Use resources like thesaurus.com to find active verbs to enhance your writing. With the right wording, nonfiction can be just as vibrant and powerful as fiction. But choose only natural, meaningful verbs. Don’t change a natural expression, like “offer condolences,” to an obscure one, like “condole,” just because it’s in the dictionary.3
Examples of Light Verbs |
Active Synonyms |
Do (someone) a favor |
Help, Aid, Assist |
Do (one’s) best |
Try, Endeavor, Aim, Strive |
Do the math |
Calculate, Compute |
Do without |
Forgo |
Give (someone) a hand |
Help, Aid, Assist |
Give advice |
Advise, Counsel, Admonish |
Give an answer |
Answer, Respond, Reply |
Give (something) a shot |
Try, Attempt |
Have a look |
Look, Examine, Scrutinize |
Have fun |
Enjoy, Relish |
Have in mind |
Intend, Plan, Propose |
Make a decision |
Decide, Determine, Resolve |
Make a difference |
Affect, Influence |
Make a living |
Earn a living, Grind out a living |
Make a promise |
Promise, Swear, Vow, Pledge |
Make fun of |
Tease, Deride, Ridicule, Heckle, Mock |
Make light of |
Downplay, Underestimate |
Make up (one’s) mind |
Decide, Determine, Resolve |
Take a look |
Look, Examine, Scrutinize |
Take into account |
Account for, Consider |
Take part |
Participate, Cooperate, Contribute |
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- ThoughtCo, s.v. “Light Verbs in English Grammar,” by Richard Nordquist, last modified February 12, 2020, https://www.thoughtco.com/light-verb-term-1691234.
- See The Verbosity Atrocity.
- See Dump the Dictionary.